Jumat, 25 Januari 2008

Analytical exposition

Being Fat is A Serious Problem

Thesis : Do you know if you are too fat, you may have serious problems with your health? A ground of doctors wrote a report about some of the effects of too much fat.

Arguments : One important effect is on the heart. If you are fat, your heart has to work harder. This may lead to a heart attack or it may lead to other heart problem.

In addition, extra fat can also change the amount of sugar in your blood. This can cause disease such as diabetes.

Furthermore high blood pressure is another possible result of being fat.

Reiteration : More studies are needed about all these problems but one thing is clear, extra fat may make your life shorter.

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